she ran away in her sleep

any critic and advice for jade would be great!!
see anything wrong?
just point me in the right direction!
thanks!!!

✿ anon on
✿ ip addressing off
✿ comments screened

jade types in bright green font
with no punctuation except for question marks or exclamation points!
sometimes in multiples!!! :D
oh did i mention the smileys??
:)

so if it's too green for you you can always opt out! just comment here and i'll either reply with video/voice instead of text or i'll take away either the color!

please also tell me if its only the color that bothers you okay? i can canter to all!!!